Research and Planning Feedback Sheet

I recieved another Research and Planning Feedback sheet, during my parents evening last week, which shows me what I need to improve in this aspect of the coursework. All the tasks that have been set are still in the 'Proficient' column, so therefore i will try and improve my marks and make some of the ticks into the 'Excellent column. Here is what my teachers recommends me to do over the half term, to improve my blog:

Research into similar products and a potential target audience - Some conventions work (more target audience)

Organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props - Reports for progress

Work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or storyboarding - show more

Presentation of research and planning - Your presentation is getting better but early work not enough

Time managment - More focus

Quanity of posts - You could be doing more

The feedback that my teacher left was: More presintation aspects.      15/20

I feel that overall, I could be improving my blog over the holidays to achieve the most marks that I can. I need to improve my presentation mainly and the quanity of posts that are needed.